Thursday, September 10, 2009

Scary 11 minute write

Claustraphobia

Darkness. Blackness. Alone.
Breathing heavy, shivering to the bone.
Trapped. No escape. No way out.
Suffocation. The only thing to think about.
Four walls, one ceiling, a floor.
Just get get away, please, no more.

Sitting, breathing, sitting and breathing.
Shut your eyes...
Out in a 100 acre field
No walls, no stop, no yield.
Freedom far as the eye can see.
Imagine the place you want to be.

Dying. Slowly. Slowly dying.
Look helplessly around.
One crack, some light, some sound.
Imagine, imagine, eyes open wide.
Exit, push through, you are outside.

1 comment:

  1. http://wherestheham.files.wordpress.com/2009/04/claustrophobia2.jpg

    here is the pic if u really wanna see it. sorry, i just could not figure out how to paste here. :(

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